CRITIQUE 1 - desert scene - composition

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Desert Scene:  Working out a composition

(above) Original Photo of desert area with wheel dominating the scene. Wall blocks viewers eye from easily passing through to the upper portion of the scene.

 

Artist would like to paint this historic scene and does not have the opportunity to re-shoot image - So here are a couple of options in keeping with the integrity of the sceen.

 

 

 

This artist only inquired about composition for this critique session

 

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